Why do I suck SO much?!?
E.E. Cummings dedicated his book of 70 poems, “No Thanks” to well, ‘No Thanks.’ Some argue that rejection is a part of the writing process. Personally, I've always felt rejection hinders creativity. Each and every single time I got my ‘No Thanks’ email from an editor or agent, my will to write and my fragilely accumulated self-esteem would wash away with my tears. So when an editor replied to my full manuscript with, “yada, it’s great, yada, yada BUT …” I braced myself for the inevitable sting of rejection. And it was there. But she returned my manuscript lightly edited and gave me two pieces of advice. Remove as many passive verbs as possible – was, were, could, should, would, etc. She mentioned an easy way to eliminate most ‘was’s is to change ‘was <>ing’ verbs to ‘<>ed’ verbs. For example: He was walking à He walked Show don’t tell. Hrmf! I know. I know exactly what you’re thinking with #2. Heard that before? Me ...